Espen - The Red Hour

this is a tune i made up
I would love if anyone would help me build on this song!!

played on acoustic guitar (don`t know how to spell that word *blush*)

|--7---7------|-----------|-----------|------6--|    
|----9---9----|--7---7----|--6---6----|-----7---|    
|-----8---8---|----8--8---|----7--7---|----8----| x? 
|--6----------|-----8--8--|-----8--8--|---8-----|    
|-------------|--6--------|--8--------|--6------|    
|-------------|-----------|-----------|---------|    

what do you think?
i know it`s not all that, but it`s just things i come up with when i`m in that mood.. you get 
me??