Rise Up Intro

ok, this is my first intro tab so i'm not so sure, but it sound ok to 
me


guitar 1
e|-------------------------------------------------------|         
B|--------------------------0----------------------------|         
G|--------1---1-----1---1------1-------------------------|         
D|-------------------------------3-2---------------------|    play 
A|-------------------------------------------------------|         
E|----2-2---2---2-2---2----------------------------------|         
e|               
B|               
G|               
D|4x's then..... 
A|               
E|               

guitar  2
e--------------------| 
B|-------------------| 
G|-------------------| 
D|-------------------| 
A|--4-4--------------| 
E|--2-2--------------| 

guitar 1
e|-------------------------------------------------------| 
B|--------------------------0----------------------------| 
G|--------1---1-----1---1------1-------------------------| 
D|-------------------------------3-2---------------------| 
A|-------------------------------------------------------| 
E|----2-2---2---2-2---2----------------------------------| 

 guitar 2
e--------------------| 
B|-------------------| 
G|-------------------| 
D|-------------------| 
A|--5-5--------------| 
E|--3-3--------------| 

guitar 1
e|-------------------------------------------------------| 
B|--------------------------0----------------------------| 
G|--------1---1-----1---1------1-------------------------| 
D|-------------------------------------------------------| 
A|-------------------------------------------------------| 
E|----2-2---2---2-2---2----------------------------------| 

guitar 2
e--------------------| 
B|-------------------| 
G|-------------------| 
D|-------------------| 
A|--7-7--------------| 
E|--5-5--------------| 

guitar 1
e|-------------------------------------------------------| 
B|--------------------------0----------------------------| 
G|--------1---1-----1---1------1-------------------------| 
D|-------------------------------------------------------| 
A|-------------------------------------------------------| 
E|----2-2---2---2-2---2----------------------------------| 

guitar 2
e--------------------| 
B|-------------------| 
G|-------------------| 
D|-------------------| 
A|--4-4--------------| 
E|--2-2--------------| 

guitar 1
e|-------------------------------------------------------| 
B|--------------------------0----------------------------| 
G|--------1---1-----1---1------1-------------------------| 
D|-------------------------------------------------------| 
A|-------------------------------------------------------| 
E|----2-2---2---2-2---2----------------------------------| 

guitar 2
e--------------------| 
B|-------------------| 
G|-------------------| 
D|-------------------| 
A|--5-5--------------| 
E|--3-3--------------| 

guitar 1
e|-------------------------------------------------------| 
B|--------------------------0----------------------------| 
G|--------1---1-----1---1------1-------------------------| 
D|-------------------------------------------------------| 
A|-------------------------------------------------------| 
E|----2-2---2---2-2---2----------------------------------| 

guitar 2
e---------------------| 
B|--------------------| 
G|--------------------| 
D|--------------------| 
A|--7-7---7~~~--------| 
E|--5-5---5~~~--------| 

well, that's all i got so far enjoy.....